Essay topics: You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date.
Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting solutions.
Dear Sir,
I recently cleared a job interview of your esteemed company and its my great fortune that I get a chance to work with you. The purpose of mine to pen down this epistle is to apologise you for not coming on the joining day because of some personal issues.
As, I am the only son of my parents and unfortunately my mother had an accident, yesterday. However, she is out of danger but doctors recommended her to take appropriate rest for at least two weeks because of the critical situation. Therefore, I have to take care of her, so that she will recover properly.
To be honest, I feel so guilty because I am unable to attend the first day of joining. My joining date is probably 15 November and because of my mother accident I will not able to come at that day. Indeed, I am so excited for that job, as it was the dream of mine to work at your organisation and now it comes true.
My mother takes only 2 weeks to recover and after that I will definitely come at work. Although, it takes four days more after 15 November but assure you that I will work diligently to make sure the breakthroughs of our company. I would be very grateful if you give me some time by extending my joining date for days later instead of 15th November.
I look forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Amn
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... interview of your esteemed company and its my great fortune that I get a chance to...
^^^
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ad of 15th November. I look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Amn
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, at least, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35772357724 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52014161408 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581300813008 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3185551196 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4615384615 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193938245411 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758993945905 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541594325028 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110211584399 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500215440473 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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