People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Music has always occupied an essential role in people's lives. At the present time, there are many types of music on the market, and each individual has the choice to listen to whatever he likes. I think this art is important for humans due to the fact that it provides a method to have fun and because it is a way to relax. I will explain my arguments, in detail, in the following essay.
First and foremost, people around the world enjoy spending qualitative time. One of the best ways to this is to listen to music. Music is present everywhere. People can choose to go to concerts, to listen to it on the street, in the park, in the public transportation and so forth. Furthermore, this method of entertainment is cheap and and its availability is pretty high. Not to mention that it is good opportunity to spend leisure time with friends. My experience is a compelling example. Back in high school, I used to go to music concerts with my colleagues. Since we were in school, we did not have a lot of money to spend on entertainment, so this was an advantageous choice. Thus, music can be a source for people to have enjoyable time.
To continue with, music is a source of relaxation, especially after a long hard-working week. It helps humans to escape from reality, from daily problems. Because of the rapid development of music, people have the chance to choose from a great variety of genres such as opera, pop, dance, disco, rock and so on. Moreover, therapeutics, spas, sport centers use music to help their clients to relax. For instance, I went to a massage salon a few years ago. The ambient was completed by music, and I was allowed to choose the type that gave me inner peace. The concoction of music with massage was a tremendous experience, which provided the perfect environment for recreation.
To summarize, music is significant for people in many circumstances. This is because it is a great way to spend leisure time, no matter of the location, and because it creates a perfect ambient for recreation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
..., this method of entertainment is cheap and and its availability is pretty high. Not to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6573816156 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81867725319 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526462395543 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8551345046 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6956521739 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6086956522 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21739130435 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254501198869 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770243948206 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675401459827 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163762693695 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156420605972 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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