: In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
In our modern world, taking a year off to gain job or discover sightseeing places in foreign countries especially for young generation between graduating from school and starting tertiary education is becoming increasingly popular. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. Hence, I understand the reason for majority of people’s concerning opinion that this period is not valuable for youngsters, but feel that they are misguided for several reasons.
One of the foremost advantages of moving away is that heading overseas, working and gaining job experiences could be considered as efficiently beneficial chance for personal development after high school. What I mean by this is that most of the time students are busy with their home assignments in school years and sometimes they restrict broadening their horizons, being more rounded and so on. Moreover, taking a year out might help them to learn to cope with strange environment and orientation. For instance, if a person travel any country they can meet people from different cultural backgrounds which impacts person socially effective.
Secondly, before starting academic studies this can be relaxing and helpful for delving into real life conditions. To cite an example, moving abroad may lead to be more self-confident and it can increase their self-esteem. Consequently, they become able to support their further studies financially by making considerable efforts.
Turning to the negative sides, nevertheless tertiary education is the most vital factor to achieve a successful career life, after returning home country students may have adaptation problems to a university ambiance and in some cases it can be resulted in homesickness. Another drawback is that as youngsters start to earn money for their work, they think it can be spent on whatever they want. One particularly salient example of this issue would be starting adverse habits such as smoking, drug addiction, alcohol consumption.
All things considered, starting free life is never straightforward. Personally, I believe that by encouraging their young citizens to work or travel for a year out, countries can could build a better future life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, i mean, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42565597668 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9810263958 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65306122449 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3985675392 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.066666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28460229849 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819214522998 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727440719474 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154299103601 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723069163248 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.