Fresh water resources diminish in large cities in the world each year, what are the problem of this critical problem? what are the solutions.
The importance of fresh water resources in large cities which has been debatable has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of diminishing fresh water resources in large cities has sparked controversy over the potential impact of this trend in urban cities, in recent years. This essay will elaborate why, fresh water resources are declining in urban cities and offer solutions to overcome this issue and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why fresh water resources are dropping off, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that, rise in population in urban cities. Example for instance, population growth has lead to deforestation, and caused ecological imbalance, water resources are replaced by large tall building and skyscrapers to accommodate human needs, Furthermore, fresh water sources like ponds and rivers are effected by industrial pollution.
Another reasons why, reduction in fresh water place in urban cities must be analysed to solve the issue, because regulations can be implicated to minimises the falling numbers of fresh water resources and thus, will limit the strain of water scarcity in urban environment. For instance, limit construction near fresh water place, planting trees, government and environmental activist should work collectively to save fresh water place from being destroyed. based on that, it can be said that fresh water places can be saved if there were enough collaborations.
For what has been said above, it can be concluded that, preserving fresh water places in urban cities is prominent, but collaborative steps to overcome this issue should not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'minimise'.
Suggestion: minimise
...ecause regulations can be implicated to minimises the falling numbers of fresh water reso...
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Line 5, column 458, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Based
...fresh water place from being destroyed. based on that, it can be said that fresh wate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45419847328 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86815998595 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557251908397 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9446308722 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.777777778 104.977214359 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1111111111 20.9669160288 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267088536668 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13315364352 0.0925447433944 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500492393225 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17470101813 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612787281079 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 12.6369458128 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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