In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic that a person can have to be successful in life. Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to support your answer.
Different people may hold different opinion about the concept of success. Some of them believe that having a good job is a success. Other people are of the opinion that success is nothing but being wealthy. In my opinion, success comes mostly from hard-working. In the following essay, I will explore reasons to support my idea.
To begin with, People, who are hard-working, do not fear from failure, and try constantly until reaching their final goal. Indeed, they believe the terminal success is depend solely on their own endeavor. For example, I was preparing myself to take TOEFL exam last year, and I needed to achieve score 100 or more on that exam. During days of studying, I faced with a plethora of problems in a way that I frustrated over and over again and decided to give it up. Owing to the fact that I was a studious person, I continued to study without any interruption. Even if after two times of failure at the exam I did not give up since I believed in myself and my real abilities. Thus, I could finally overcome all the problems and get the required score on than exam. Had not I been a studious person, I would not have been able to pass that exam with the score I needed.
Furthermore, studious people enjoy from a self-confidence that may help them to get success. In other words, studious persons know their ability and this makes them believe in themselves. Thus, other people would believe in them. My collaboration with my Master’s program supervisor could be a compelling example of this. Since my thesis had been done perfectly, the supervisor of my thesis had a positive thought about me. Therefore, after finishing my thesis he proposed me to accept being advisor in some other student’s research. Being at these researches caused me to make a connection with some famous professors in other countries, one of them was Professor Mike Granola from the University of Wisconsin. As a result, I could materialize my dream that was getting accepted at the University of Wisconsin for a post-doctoral program. Had not I been a self-reliance person, I would not have been able to getting acceptance of the University of Wisconsin.
In conclusion, I am of the view that hard-working is the most key feature someone should have to be successful in life. This is because those people never fear from failure and are constant in their way, and because they are self-reliance, which could help them to reach success.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-04-27 | Nanaii-parpar | 70 | view |
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 73
- In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic that a person can have to be successful in life. Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 168, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...d, they believe the terminal success is depend solely on their own endeavor. For examp...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78301886792 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83193342447 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507075471698 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6170664181 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13367202548 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452000053699 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451693568523 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104141086911 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598882719791 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.