Television dominates the free-time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, technological advancement has resulted in many people spending all of their spare time watching soap operas, music videos and other entertaining programmes. This development leads to people being indolent and not able to interact with others in the society. In my opinion, I completely agree that people who spend more of their spare time in front TV are work-shy and unsocial.
Television programmes influences people to live sedentary life style which has a negative impact on their health instead of engaging to other leisure and cognitive activities. In other words, many spend hours watching their favourite TV shows such as, soap operas and music videos, thereby, sitting on the same position for hours which cause health problems such as obesity and heart related issues. Also, they turn not to have the desire to prepare delicious and healthy food but depend solely on junk food. A recent study in UK concluded that seventy percent of obese people in Manchester spend many hours watching different TV programs and depends on fast food.
Nowadays people encounter a lot of problems because they lack interacting abilities. People turn to have connection with television characters and also enjoy watching their favourite shows, music videos, football games, get news and so on than they have when with people. This often results to people not being able to relate with others in the community. Studies have shown that those addicted to TV programs when young have difficulty finding a partner later in life.
In conclusion, People occupy themselves on their spare time by enjoying their most likes television shows, music videos and video games. This makes a lot of people indolent and hence deterring them from socialising. In my opinion, I strongly agree that media is causing a lot of health problems to individuals and at the same fragmenting our society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1868852459 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58807967605 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56393442623 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8247680745 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16458000336 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616371450209 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409819025786 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107568180718 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286995249364 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.