"The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. "
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.
Although, there are certain rules and laws check corporations from going beyond ethical norms for maximizing the revenue, it has often proved to be unsuccessful and many corporations eventually find out a way to eschew such laws and exploit it for their benefit without caring about its impact in general public. so it is true in large extent that these ever increasing desires of corporations is bound to create conflict with the general publics' welfare.
Firstly, the corporations is run by large group of stake holders whose primary incentive is to maximize the monetary value of corporation as much as possible and if a conflict arises between profit and general welfare, the priority is obviously given to the option that adds to the value of company. Although few board members may argue in favor of public, more often such opinions lie in the minority and gets neglected. It can be exemplified by the recent hot controversy of the company Facebook selling user data to third company without letting its users know about how their data was being used. If such trusted corporations can sometimes go out ow way for the sake of more money, then it can be imagined there are other numerous companies which could have gone to similar length for the sake of extra profit. Despite the pros of current digital modern world, it has its shady as well as dark sides that general public may not be aware of but the companies are likely to exploit. Data has become the new gold in this era and many softwares,websites and applications seem to be fishing for new public data as much as possible in order to sell to other marketing, analytic companies. Such new crimes are not well defined by rules and laws and hence easier to bypass.
Moreover, in other corporations selling tangible goods to its consumers, as the corporations' demand grows over time, they have to increase the production value in terms of quantity and this has impact over the quality of the material they provide and if slight degradation over the quality is sure to maximize the profit they do not hesitate to go that way. But its a slippery slope, the greed for more never settles and overtime the compromise may become so harmful to the public that a strong action is needed to control such behaviors. It applies mostly in the food industry where a slight negligence can have devastating consequence on general health.
Therefore in todays society where everyone is motivated to uplift their economic status, it is safe to say that, general welfare gets often neglected. Although, minority may protest and try to revert back to what is right, they get lost in the crowd and unless proper governing mechanism that properly addresses such problems are made, the scenario may remain unchanged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, third, well, in general, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2294.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87048832272 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60885547908 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532908704883 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 739.8 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.7290488588 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.857142857 118.986275619 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6428571429 23.4991977007 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 5.21951772744 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107125571581 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391065646553 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553628823681 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694228919801 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052534659419 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.