Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of the average revenue of qualified workers in comparison of other careers particularly sports players and celebrities, and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although the high revenue of these perfessional settlers is beneficial as it regarded by a substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that they should earn more than other jobs due to their contribution and other benefits which present to society.
From a social standpoint, an array of inhabitants argued that the skilled workers who have demanding jobs should have more income, because they can provide the society with noteacible effects which are rooted in the fact of flourishing. According to my own experience, I performed an academic experiment discoverd the factors that lead to prosperous future. For instance, teachers instruct the youths and play a pivotal role in their upbringing. Furthermore, doctors manage the health in the nation and we have a plethora of difficulties without them. Undoubtedly, the role of these ocupations is vital and they should have this right to have an appropriate income.
There is no doubt sportsmen or women and celebrities have well being jobs because of their popularity. The media is one of the most significant factors of creating this feature. These citizens can easily grab everybody's attention by the power of fantastic programs, Internet, magezins and newspapers. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertakan by a prestigious world-renowned university has asseted that due to the universal interest of sports and cinema, a great deal amount of money is spent annually in them. Hence, sports players and artists are quite rich.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the professions should have well being jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
... because of their popularity. The media is one of the most significant factors of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, while, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45150501672 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02409572863 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622073578595 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7428590069 50.4703680194 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.428571429 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0704818228759 0.242375264174 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021117359803 0.0925447433944 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270550469152 0.071462118173 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0352106005552 0.151781067708 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254667118046 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.32886699507 123% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 55.0591133005 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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