In some countries, it is common for women to participate in the workforce when their children are young. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Gone are the days when women were bind to four walls of the house. Ladies join their job after giving birth to the babies in many nations. Well, this practice has both merits and demerits. I am writing about the advantages as well as disadvantages in following paragraphs.
There are plethora of advantages of engaging in the workforce by women when their children are young. Some of them are, firstly, in today's era of exploitation, it is very difficult for a single person to run the house and to meet the needs of all the family members. So, it is necessary for both the partners to earn money. Mother can join the office immediately after her delivery to support her husband financially. Secondly, If women continue her service, she would be aware of what is happening around the world and about the leading technologies. It would help her to teach the skills and use of technology to their children which would help children in their studies and for the survival in this developing world.
Thirdly, mother will become a role model of their offspring as she is managing both house and office at same time. It would inspire their children to work hard and to perform multi-tasking. Young-ones of such mothers are more responsible. In addition to that allowing women to do the job of her choice for whole life help her to be independent and boost their self-confidence. She will handle her job as well as house properly with full enthusiasm.
On the other hand there are some demerits. Ladies are not able to take proper care of their babies as they are going to office daily. So, their offspring may suffer from bad health. Moreover, not spending enough time with their children, their young-ones are not that much attached to them. So, children do not share their feelings with their mothers.
In conclusion, I would to say that advantages overpower the disadvantages and these demerits can be overcome by leaving children with their grand parents or with care taker.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64417600366 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533724340176 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5229421876 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2380952381 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2380952381 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7619047619 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328962995693 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936573747645 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902379893547 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17234103959 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612073777212 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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