Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job then to earn a lot of money. Other disagree and think that a good salary leads to better life. Discuss both views and give your opinion
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irreuocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that whether enjoyable job or high salary is necessary to live a happy life? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of the topic with illustration and examples and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who reckon that job full of happiness is highly essential to live better life. They strengthen their view point by claiming that happiness is a "Part and parcel" of the life. A good illustration of this is, If job is according to the will of an individual or according to the interest of person it leads to encourage him to do his duty with honesty. As a result, everyone commited to his work. Therefore, it leads to the good outcomes in any sector of business.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of an individual who argue that big salaries ultimately leads to healthy lifestyle. To make their view point convincing they claim that building home with modern infrastructure is not a 'cup of tea.' For this massive amount is required. It is only possible if person earn good salary. Therefore, able to fulfill the necessatities of life such as, buy good quality of product, house as well as provide education to their children in well established institutes. Spending holidays in foreign country by celebrities and international players having high salary would be the perfect epitome.
To make it crown, weighing both the options, I realize that there is no single conclusion still, I take this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands. Nodoubt, joy and happiness is an integral part of everyone life but earning big salaries provide great assistance to fullfill the dreams of human.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that whether enjoyable job...
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...iew point by claiming that happiness is a 'Part and parcel' of the life...
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...convincing they claim that building home with modern infrastructure is not a cup ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88622754491 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86132321995 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577844311377 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9669181883 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233355344011 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600320796395 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416490562038 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129938439173 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238700354407 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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