The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing , including the process by which information is fed back to earlier to enable adjustment .
The given diagram illustrates the stages involved in the manufacturing of consumer goods including feedbacks for previous stages which further until adjustment .
It can be clearly seen that , the process begins with the purchase of raw materials and manufactured components . Then the material is stored until the production planning ; the latter provides the feedback for the former . Moreover , it includes product research and design also . Then the process has been carried through the stages : assembly , inspection , testing and packaging which is then despatched for the sales .
After that , sales gives the feedback to planning production and market research . Then , market research provides rechecking to advertising as well as packaging . Again , it gives feedback to design which is further rechecked by testing . Then , finally the consumer goods have been manufactured .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, moreover, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 129.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77519379845 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9602538117 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596899224806 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2377309736 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7777777778 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207108006988 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865775856526 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103808141964 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177447261857 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117149425424 0.0819641961636 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.65 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.