Some people claim that censorship is necessary because there are too many undesirable contents in the mass media, while others argue that it will hinder information freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Recently, with the development of economic and the freedom of citizen’s thought, the more and more variable medias play a significant role in human beings’ live. Meanwhile we are vulnerable to connect with harmful contents presenting in the newspaper, the television or the internet. In this situation, some people consist on conducting the censorship to filter the information which would do a detrimental effect on mature juveniles, nevertheless, some people object to the regulation of message because it would make constraint to exchange of information. As far as I am concerned, we should set up a suit of rigorous censorship to classify the information based on their contents and different people could accept different according what their want.
The censorship makes a positive impact on children. There are an enormous quality of advertisement aiming at teenagers but some of them full of violence or sexual implication. The passive substance let the mature juvenile go astray. They could imitate the movements what they learn from the advertisement. In order to avoid error message influencing children, we set up the censorship. The internet or television could optimize contents and not only do the information in the mass media could make positive impact on children but also widen kids’ horizon.
Therefore, with the upfolding of the censorship, some innocent coverage may be filter like the news which expose the darkness of the society especially the movie. Because of the censorship, the intact information because inaccessible or the exposure what we accept is delay after the filter or censor. And when we chat at social media or converse with our friends in the internet, our comments could have to censor and then ensure it correspond the regulation. On this occasion, the censorship makes negative influence on freedom of information.
Overall, we still can not give a perfect decision which is better. The censorship guarantee the contents in the mass media is safe and positive but meanwhile it would cause the missing of message and restrict the freedom of the information. For my perspective, we should classify the information into several categories and everyone is invested the right to accept the diversity of information in different categories.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...ficant role in human beings' live. Meanwhile we are vulnerable to connect with harmf...
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Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'corresponds'?
Suggestion: corresponds
...could have to censor and then ensure it correspond the regulation. On this occasion, the c...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'guarantees'.
Suggestion: guarantees
...ecision which is better. The censorship guarantee the contents in the mass media is safe ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37569060773 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07167414877 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519337016575 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4161185511 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.470588235 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193016588801 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058955422455 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04341957988 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123401148488 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272117552917 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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