Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past.
This modern era we live in has undoubtedly altered people’s lifestyle through countless ways. It is often argued that a lot of children are currently suffering from the low attention they receive compared to children in the old days. Personally, I strongly agree with this belief.
There are many examples how our lifestyle has changed in a way that created a distance between us and our offspring. Firstly, it is quite clear that recreational activities have become much more diverse and affordable than in the past. For instance, online games through modern gadgets have invaded our leisure time. These games have controlled not only youngsters but also adults, including many parents. Moreover, modern life requires parents to spend a remarkable amount of time in work so they can cope with the increasing living expenses. Therefore, more and more time had been deducted from the time which is supposed to be spent with our future leaders.
Undeniably, this development has led to a noticeable increase in children suffering in various aspects. For example, those busy parents no longer follow the academic achievement of their offspring. As a result, besides children’s poor achievement, they may grow with a deep feeling that schools are not a crucial stage in life. In addition, less attention and care for children may lead to prospective psychological disturbance. This is because children, in their critical ages, need to feel love and passion. Otherwise, they may be subjected to the lack of tenderness in the future, which is a serious issue that has a detrimental effect on individuals. If parents advocate more time to raise their children in a healthy way, children will less likely to suffer from such issues.
In conclusion, it is obvious from what has been discussed above that modern lifestyle has brought lots of fathers and mothers away from their children. Consequently, achievement of children at schools and their mental states will be harmfully impacted.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-10-31 | Anmol Thukral | 56 | view |
| 2019-08-11 | Kaursatinder | 67 | view |
| 2019-05-15 | Jasmineeee | 91 | view |
| 2018-10-23 | emat18 | 78 | view |
| 2018-05-13 | medinfo91 | 84 | view |
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your o 89
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both views and give you opinion. 78
- Air pollution has made cities become less pleasant places to live in recent years What do you think are the causes of this problem and what solutions can you suggest 79
- Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people think that public health is a responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health Discuss both sides and give your opinion 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 714, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a healthy way" with adverb for "healthy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ocate more time to raise their children in a healthy way, children will less likely to suffer fr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21183800623 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87582308236 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604361370717 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2445761592 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.9444444444 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457736283358 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120169094361 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794703850891 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243758891707 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665869290651 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.