Some people say that science study should be mandatory in schools; others argue that it is unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is different opinion about whether science study should be mandatory in schools. I think individuals should receive basic science training before work.
In one hand, science study has obviously beneficials. Firstly, every aspect of living has relations with science today. People need mathematic skill to buy products and do financial budget. Computer operation is necessary in both working and entertainment. One nearly can’t live a normal life without basic science ability. Additionally, master some science knowledge help people escape from being deceived. A lot of elder buy highly priced health care products without effect , because they don’t know enough biological knowledge. Further more, science study improve one’s thought ability. The brain would develop maximized if it deserved fully training. The idea, experiment, and theory process is also a good methodology.
In other hand, science is only a portion of world. Nowadays, the scope of science is so wide and the depth is so deep, that student often consume huge time to study. To be honestly, A little percent of people would become scientist in their career. Without practice, most of people forget lots of knowledge learning from school after work. Besides science, cultural and arts courses are also important in one’s life.
In conclusion, I think one should learn basic science knowledge in school for better living in today society. It is better that there are different level of science training for all kinds of students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, honestly, if, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4641350211 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63991633419 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649789029536 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.9760244104 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.1578947368 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4736842105 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73684210526 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232304435983 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713999555748 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812745632166 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152980775522 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849170799491 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.5 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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