More and more couples are deciding to be "child-free", to have no children, in other words. Some people claim that those couples reach this conclusion through entirely selfish reasons. While others think that they came to this decision through noble motives, such as concern about overpopulation and desire for independence.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The trend of child-free couples will increase in most of the western countries in the nearest future. Because some people think that it is big problem to have children due to the more responsibility as well as more and more people concern about overpopulation. While, other argues that it is not to be a good solution to reduce population, even by this society become selfish, feelings less and also it can become older countries without children. I will discuss both statement and give my opinion.
To begin with, there are some advantages to have no children. First and foremost, people who are deciding to be child-free, they do not have any tension and feel relax because of less responsibility and they can spend as much as time with their partner. For instance, they have easily take care of each other such as, spend time to do exercise, travel, plan some parties with their friends instead to give time to their children. Even, women can do study and job easily after marriage. It gives freedom to females to do anything what they like and focus on their goal rather than to take responsibility of kids. In addition, couple who are without their child they are more financial stable in comparison to those who have parents. For instance, parents have to be spend so much money on children to their needs.
On the other hand, children plays a very important role in our life. Because, couples who have their children are more happy in life compared to those who do not have to expand their family. In family, parents can play with their children and look at their smiley faces it reduce some stress from busy schedule of parents. Even, parents can take help from children whenever they need specially when they are in older age and need extra care. Moreover, through the children society becomes more caring and advanced.
In conclusion, Although there are a bunches of positive influences of child less couple, I strongly believe that child-free is not a solution of overpopulation, we can control population by decrease the number of children instead of no children.
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Suggestion: reduces
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bunch' or simply 'bunches'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84593837535 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56984444349 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50700280112 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7986120401 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.764705882 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52941176471 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283358142179 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941623378329 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597872695086 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174966793523 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060577984794 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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