Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether dangerous sports need to be forbidden or the governments should allow the people to choose the activities that they like freely. While some sports do cause severe injuries and should be restricted, I believe individuals have the rights to participate in any kind of sports even when the sports and very dangerous.
There are several reasons why people think that dangerous activities need to be banned by the governments. Firstly, these types of activity can cause huge damage to both players and the others. Therefore, some individuals want such dangerous sports to be completely restricted. As a result, they will feel safer if there are no harmful potentials around them. Secondly, since both the players and the audience of these activities are mostly young adults who are prejudice and not fully in control of their behavior, the parents will definitely vote for banning all of the dangerous sports that their children are participating.
However, people should be allowed to make their own decisions without any interference from the others. They have the freedom to choose what sports they like to do. Moreover, people will learn to accept the consequences of injuring themselves when they choose these sports in their own preferences. In addition, more and more people tend to enjoy participating in the dangerous activities nowadays which they are willing to spend more money on such activities. Therefore, the governments can have a big profit by the taxes from the sponsor companies of this kind of entertainment.
In conclusion, while some people argue that extremely harmful sports need to be banned, I believe governments should continue allowing people to freely participating in these sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...hese activities are mostly young adults who are prejudice and not fully in control of t...
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Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...arents will definitely vote for banning all of the dangerous sports that their children ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29285714286 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82304655235 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521428571429 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2443737262 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363306132991 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126374682342 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827070897757 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237095748995 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630157852466 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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