recently your neighbor sent you a note that noise comes from your home which disturbs their grand father.
write a letter to your neighbor and tell them about a wedding ceremony of elder brother happening next week.
promise them that the noise will be reduced from before and request them to bear for a week more as too many guests are residing at your home.
Dear, Mr.Amjad,
i am writing you this letter as a response to your note which i got yesterday. Its such a shame that we have caused your family such inconvenience. I profoundly apologize with all my heart and soul for such reason.
As you know, my elder brother Akif came back from Dubai this week, so we are planning his wedding ceremony for upcoming week. So, there a lot of guests residing in our home at this vary moment. As it is a known fact that our local weddings have lots of cherishing activities in which all the friends and family takes part with all their enthusiasm, which can lead to unusual noise.
I, promise to personally take care of it from now on and i will do anything possible to keep it as low as i can. Lastly, i request you to please co-operate for a week more and accept this pack of chocolates attached to the letter as a token of my deepest regret for the inconvenience.
Truly yours,
Irfan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Amjad
Dear, Mr.Amjad, i am writing you this letter as a r...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
Dear, Mr.Amjad, i am writing you this letter as a respons...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...letter as a response to your note which i got yesterday. Its such a shame that we...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sonally take care of it from now on and i will do anything possible to keep it as...
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... anything possible to keep it as low as i can. Lastly, i request you to please co...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ble to keep it as low as i can. Lastly, i request you to please co-operate for a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, so, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43604651163 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54049810296 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662790697674 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7740090991 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7777777778 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176496672432 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632471047282 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536181917317 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113037627665 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024329417948 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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