You have just moved into a new house and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter
Introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
Invite your neighbor to come
Dear Mr. Adnan,
Hello! This is your new neighbor Irfan. I am writing this letter, as I seek your co-operation for the fascinating party that I have planned in your neighborhood.
My full name is Irfan Ullah, and I work at state bank of Pakistan. As you know, I moved into the adjacent house of yours this week, so, therefore, in due celebrations, I have planned a party for all my family and friends this weekend evening.
There will be singing and video gaming contests among some, and we have also invited a magician for the kids as well. While, some may prefer to gossip and chitchat, there may be some who will like to play the piano in lounge. Not to forget, there will be vast variety of food and refreshments in dinner. Last but not the least; we will cut a cake right after dinner.
I and my wife urge you to please join us and let us have the honor of hospitality. I apologize in advance, for any inconvenience your family may experience. We will try our best to keep it as low as we can.
Sincerely yours,
Irfan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Adnan
Dear Mr.Adnan, Hello! This is your new neighbor Ir...
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Line 9, column 193, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'quiets'?
Suggestion: quiets
...nce. We will try our best to keep it as quiet as we can. Sincerely yours, Irfan ...
^^^^^
Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...et as we can. Sincerely yours, Irfan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46073298429 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54236869993 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5013527901 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288367323504 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091975012268 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113112713778 0.0603063233224 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190836293189 0.12726935374 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139593889102 0.0580467560999 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.