Television shows and its impact on society
There is an ongoing debate among intellectuals regarding the television. In this regard, some protagonists assert that different shows has positive impact on society whereas antagonists censure this notion. They profess that these programs have negative impacts on the dwellers. All the sides of this notion will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs in order to deduce reasonable outcome.
Protagonists who opine that television has positive impact on the society members substantiate their point by citing that it helps them to get the information about the things happening around them. Firstly, some TV shows are based on the academic information and help peoples to understand the common hurdles of the education. It provides them the technical and analytical information. Secondly, some of the programs are based on the crime shows that will not only help the society to learn about various threats in the surrounding but also make them capable to tackle this issues.
However, there is group of antagonists who profess that television shows have negative impact on the denizens support their logic by saying that these programs have negative content. Firstly, some of these shows have violent content and are full of fighting scenes. Young generation usually learn unethical values from these programs, and they try the same in their real life. This will not only cause accidents but also increase the crime rate in the society.
At the end recapitulating the whole discussion, it is conceded that television shows have both positive and negative impacts on the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33864541833 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6919655689 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533864541833 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.169228206 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265254281028 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862763844508 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821217029935 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173479145468 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038705606928 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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