Government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. Agree or disagree?
The music, art and painting contribute integral part of a country due to multiple factors, but some people believe that government should reduce investing money in music, art and painting. In this essay, let's look at the effects of these values on human life.
Music plays an important role in the welfare of the society as some people believe that music keeps our mind relax and entertain. Moreover, the combination of music, art and painting contribute towards the development of the society as theaters and films are source of entertainment and they contributes towards the country growth. So, it is the responsibility of the government to spend some amount of budget towards cultural activities.
On the other hand, some people think that government is wasting money while promoting music, art and painting as these values are nowhere related to financial transaction. However, cultural and regional events are the basic fundamentals for any country, which can be showcase by various actors while working in movies. In movies, the demonstration can be given to people by musical songs, so that people get to know about historical events.
In conclusion, government should leverage tax on films, which are based on cultural events as they support heritage of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 206.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23300970874 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76569548993 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572815533981 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9871773792 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.777777778 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188832957846 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754108630076 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837552762128 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121353705477 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704300356934 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.