write a letter to your friend
say what type of party eg themed, fancy dress etc.
suggest a suitable venue
make recommendation as to entertainment
Dear XXX,
I cannot believe that soon you are going to be an adult officially. This is a very crucial time, marking a transition from adolescent to adult. And as a result, these years are going to have an indispensable reflection on your future.
Therefore, I have great plans to commemorate this day. As I know, about your indulgence in novel-like Macbeth, Great Gatsby, Sherlock Holmes. I am thinking of the novel inspired themed party, fancy dress or a black-tie event.
Since I am aware that the party is going to stretch late in the night. I would like to suggest ”the Whistling Teal” as the venue keeping our time in account. Firstly, they don’t have time limits or noise restriction as it is far away from any residential area. Secondly, it has an ample amount space to accommodate guests. Thirdly, it is value for money as our bookings will include dinner and snacks. Last but not the least, they have a swimming pool, sports facilities and a discotheque with a DJ.
Together with it, they can arrange a live band on our request. I would certainly recommend the famous “Acadian band” who is an ace in the jazz music. Owing to the fact that, our whole social group devours the jazz music. But, there is one cliché, this band needs to be booked three months prior.
I am avidly waiting for the special day and hoping to hear soon from you. You can always write to me for any further queries or support.
Regards
xxxxx
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Comments
Yes, it is right on topic.
Yes, it is right on topic. The e-grade is looking for key words like: recommendation, entertainment, but can't find them in the essay.
The score should be around 8.0 out of 9.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...arty, fancy dress or a black-tie event. Since I am aware that the party is going to s...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7109375 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60178536958 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65234375 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.9575727267 44.8134815571 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.0 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2222222222 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0610376307282 0.216113520407 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0163234531784 0.0766984524023 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.023266159307 0.0603063233224 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0321262840355 0.12726935374 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187262976907 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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