The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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our approach to information has been great...
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our approach to information has been greatly improved...
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...to information has been greatly improved by the Internet.i strongly believe that ...
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...ions .this essay will shed lights on how we are becoming more aware and informe...
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...ill shed lights on how we are becoming more aware and informed about the things...
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...l way of getting education and business.now a days,people are getting education from the i...
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...etting education and business.now a days,people are getting education from the institut...
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...institutes which are out of their access,physically and economically. for example MOOCs, &a...
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...eir access,physically and economically. for example MOOCs, ' massive open onli...
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... ' massive open online course',is getting very popular among students,res...
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...;,is getting very popular among students,researchers, professionals and businessmen,who want...
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...searchers, professionals and businessmen,who want to increase their skill set.Means ...
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...en,who want to increase their skill set.Means of doing business is also changed as pe...
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...g business is also changed as people can sell their products online and buy from...
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...ness is also changed as people can sell their products online and buy from other...
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...d buy from other countries as well. internet has connected our world in way that it ...
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... we have access in every corner on earth,which enable us to learn about the culture an...
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...f different nations in other countries. moreover,we get to know,instantly, about the eve...
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...ent nations in other countries. moreover,we get to know,instantly, about the events...
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...other countries. moreover,we get to know,instantly, about the events which are happening i...
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...which are happening in other countries. for example we can watch world sports event...
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...s while setting at home in our country. last but no the least, social media sites ar...
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...o different religion, race and culture. they are helping us to keep in touch with ou...
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...g us to keep in touch with our relatives ,friends and what they are upto. the u...
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...and what they are upto. the upshot is ,internet has been improved our knowledge...
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... been improved our knowledge and wisdom in a commendable way.by leveraging the coffers of informatio...
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...g the coffers of information of internet,human being is exploring the new horizon of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36538461538 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27767010265 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611538461538 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.7579672091 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.0 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8888888889 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158822375241 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05886613848 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368529323086 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932918441283 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161731426218 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.