some people believe that travelling within a city is better by car while some other think bicycle is a better means.Discuss both sides and given your opinion.
In today's modernization,the lifestyles of people have been greatly affected.They acheived various milestones.However, some issues remains unchallenged and as complex as ever.one such issues here few masses believe travelling within a city is better by car while source other think bicycle is a better through this statement i shall explore the dimensions in this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
on the one side,there is a group of people who believe that travelling within a city better by car.Travelling is the best activity to fell relaxed.The people are travelling by car becausr car is a good transport to travelling one place to another place.In modern era,all peoples are prefer a car in any country in spite of there are many benifits to travelled by car transport.First of all,it is modern technology there are many new cars develop day by day .It is easy to drive any people.A good illustration this swift dezire,honda city.
contrary to this,there is opposing group of people who believe that some people think bicycle is a better.I also little agree this point,because there are lots of benifits to travelling by a bicycle.Bicycle travelling is good for health.It is a good exercise not only but also older people are most use bicycle because it is good way to fit and healthy.
In conclusion,weighing both options,I believe that there is no signal conclusion still i take this ground that an effective clap requires both use of hands.Both transport is a part of parcel in human's life.People prefer to this transport.some people use to transport jobs and travelling in holidays.It is the best way to transport to one place to another place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, while, in conclusion, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07246376812 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25706702606 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9674759607 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 350.0 106.682146367 328% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.0 20.7667163134 332% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.25 7.06120827912 315% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357985435078 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211728857131 0.084324248473 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07749169759 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211728857131 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07749169759 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.9 13.0946893788 282% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.44 50.2224549098 3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.3001002004 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.31 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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