Some people consider price as the most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cellphone) or service (eg: medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?
Certain individuals are giving foremost importance to the cost prior to making any sort of purchases. I totally agree with this trend as everything is getting more and more expensive these days, it is very crucial to make wise buys. In this essay, I will firstly cover the reason for this pattern and secondly how this change is helping families spend wisely.
People purchasing is on the higher side compared to the past years. With technology advancing, we come across new and improved products and services in the market year after year; this means people are more attracted to buy latest innovations leading them to spend often. For example, companies like Apple, Samsung, BlackBerry are releasing the updated version of their phones and tablets every year.
In the recent days, a person who decides to get a commodity first spending more time on the internet studying the features of the product or the service, he then decides to check for alternate options with the cheaper price or plans to wait for the item to be discounted. For example, many Chinese mobile companies are now copying the same tools of a Samsung or Apple phones.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that people should give prime focus to their expenditure, yet ensure they are keeping up with the trends of the new generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'buy the latest'.
Suggestion: buy the latest
...this means people are more attracted to buy latest innovations leading them to spend often...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89237668161 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49261210054 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663677130045 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8947533818 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.222222222 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0734592144902 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281398268252 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266430636834 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0406370816888 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216717498533 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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