You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Vincent,
I hope you and your family are doing great. It’s been sometime since I’ve heard from you. How are things going with you? Especially, the new job which you have switched to?
I’m pleased to inform you that after a long wait and constant search, I’ve finally found my dream home. As you know, my previous residence was in town center with noisy and busy neighborhood. Additionally, it was very small and was insufficient to accommodate guests. Therefore, I finally managed to shift to another independent villa.
One of the best things about the new home is that it is located at outskirts of the town center with quiet and peaceful neighborhood. Although it’s a bit far from city, it has efficient and cheap public transport facilities to easily commute to work. Additionally, it is a spacious duplex villa with beautiful backyard and private pool.
Why don’t you visit us for upcoming Christmas holidays? We’ll definitely have quality time in my luxurious home. I’ll invite all other university mates and have a blast during the eve. And don’t forget to bring along your family.
Looking forward to have enjoyable and blasting vacation. Do reply as soon as you can and convey my greetings to aunty and uncle.
Best Regards,
Azhar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to having'.
Suggestion: to having
...g along your family. Looking forward to have enjoyable and blasting vacation. Do rep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19811320755 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74147112648 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679245283019 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5272232987 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2222222222 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7777777778 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166924605465 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557044454941 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493511465273 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997128405207 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697910682837 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.