The local government is planning to change the bus timetable. You are not happy about the proposed changes.
Write a letter to the newspaper. In the letter
• describe the changes
• explain how that will affect you
• say how you would like the service to be improved
Dear Sir,
My name is Truong Nguyen, who is currently a local resident in district 11. Lately, I have heard that the local bus timetable would be changed next month. Both local residents and I are quite unhappy about this proposal. Therefore, I am writing this letter regarding this matter.
Allow me to address the problem. I have been using the local bus service to travel to work daily at 6 in the morning for almost 10 years. Since my boss is very strict and requires my present at exact 6:30, I do not think I will make it to my destination in time when the bus changes to start at 6:15. Furthermore, I am currently living with tight budget at the moment so apparently I cannot afford other types of transport. Therefore, I hope that the committee will reconsider this plan of changing the bus timetable. In addition, I believe the customers would be much more satisfied if the authority could provide some additional buses due to the high demand of this mean of transportation.
I hope that the committee will reconsider this plan and have a look at my proposal.
Yours faithfully,
Truong Nguyen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70408163265 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67734179745 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627551020408 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6884709911 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8333333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157500441461 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584651656391 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577054744395 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10586387333 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399185503454 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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