Television advertising directed towards young children (aged 2 to 5) should not be allowed.
There can be no doubt that, advertising is not a recent or new issue in peoples' lives. No one can deny the direct and indirect effect of advertising on individuals and social lives. stemming for this fact, TV ads have had a more profound impact in people lives, young children are not excepthin. now the controversial question which arises is that TV ads directed towards ypoung childeren shold not be allowed or not. From my vantage point of view,ads can has a desolate influence not only on very young children but also on their parents.In the following paragraphs I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
As the first reason I want to point out something which is widely accepted. It is impossible to niglect the
ffect of unreasonable and misleaded TV ads on soul of parents. parents like all people are acquainted from overstanding slogane associated with cartoon fitures and often resiste against those. But since young children have not a mature conception, take impacr and often insist on parchasing this products and if parents dont pay attention to this matter children maight start crying and screaming. therefore, misleading and exaggerate ads and subsequently chilren irrational requesting can bring about bother and upset for their parents. and even if this matter dont stop and continue, will encounter parents with monetary problems. Fore example, when my younger brother was very young about 5 years old, whenever he see any toy-playing with other kids, instantly start to crying and my mother that can not endure his tear, buy those unavoidablly, even if those were not usable and utelitarian. Hence, my mother since we were in a bad economic situation, my parrent bother from purchasing useless toy- playing. all in all you can see how important this factor really is.
the second exquisite reason to be mentioned is that TV ads directed toward young children can threaten their healthy. nowadays, there are lots of manufacturer or promoter related to varying products that always try to create lots of attractive ads for rising in their sales. most of the time their ads are not true and conrain enormous mislead and dishonesty. this products such as fastfoods or other ediable not only are not nutritious, but also have a very destructive effect on their health. for example another problemthat we had with my younger brother related to TV ads was that he severely had attraction towards fastfoods. and so for this matter he got very fat because of temperat eating of this foods.
as the aforementioned points cited, TV ads directed towards very young children can be very destructive not only for them but also for their parents. So it is recommended governments pay more attention to this matter and make it prohibition for any TV programme.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, really, second, so, therefore, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2313.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00649350649 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73701020543 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519480519481 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 703.8 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0779074364 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.136363636 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157550109401 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512692805849 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723047800642 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978236797713 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731300096327 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.