In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Obesity has become a serious matter the effects children in many countries. While parents directly control the food their children consume, some individuals still believe that the governments must be accounted for this responsibility. In my opinion, I think preventing children from being overweight is a duty for both parents and the governments.
On the one hand, it is the governments’ job to restrict unhealthy food industry and provide health care for overweight children. Since there are many types of food being pushed to the market, these foods need to be categorized then evaluated whether they are healthy or not. Such task has to be carried out with research provided by the governments. Furthermore, only the authorities have the resource to establish national health care and large scale solution for the obesity problem among children. For example, many attempts to stop obesity by private organization in Vietnam have been shut because of the funding shortage, only one campaign run by the Congress is still being carried out.
On the other hand, parents need to actively control the food or drink that their kids use in order to prevent them from getting overweight. Firstly, parents can implement daily meals with more healthy substances such as vitamins and minerals. Scientists have proved that these substances can effect on human’s bowel system to reduce the absorbance of fat, thus stopping the obesity. Secondly, only parents are able to convince their kids to go on a diet and do more exercises. In the long term, this change in children’s behavior also leads to better physical health.
In conclusion, I believe that both parents and the governments share the responsibility for this rising problem of children obesity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, while, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28014184397 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90024316081 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581560283688 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5790248034 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.357142857 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166452932862 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061096489768 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524592127915 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108155185202 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665153287376 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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