People in the past lived a long and happy life without even struggling much. Today, people struggle a lot but do not live a long and happy life. Give your views. Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In modern times, people aspire to get happiness and live long life but hardly such wishes are fulfilled. Conversely, our ancestors enjoyed life fullest and lived more without much struggle in day to day life. There are different reasons for this drastic change and I shall explain in essay.
It is quite often heard that nobody is happier nowadays and everyone suffers some or other problems in life. The first and foremost reason for discontent is rising ambitions in life which makes the life restless and people particularly young generation press hard to achieve , resulting, unhappiness in life. For instance, my brother who wants to be a wealthy man in couple of years’ time which is quite tough and I found him demotivated most of the time as he has not become successful. Further, recurring desires and thereupon efforts to attain the goals comes at cost. Sometimes, people devote most of their time in working and dis-balance their life style which cause overweight, blood pressure problem and many more and few succumb to diseases. Another main reason is disruption of technologies in life which do not allow a free personal space and even excessive use drives towards stress, depression etc.
On the other hand, people in past did not have any mobile phones or television but still enjoyed the content full life and lived for longer period. The main reason for happiness was easy and health life style. Most of the people worked in fields and did extensive labour work which helped to keep them away from sedentary life style, thereby, lead healthy and happy life. Furthermore, most of the eatables and beverages were pure and crops were grown without fertilizers that protected people from various illness. For example, Medical experts report that use of pesticides has serve side-affect and should not be used and vouched for ancient way for farming.
To sum-up, While era in which we are living offers so many wonderful things, happiness has been become the things of past and struggle in life increased in multifold. I believe that people in past had good life and lived longer than us though they did not have technology or gadgets at their disposal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y young generation press hard to achieve , resulting, unhappiness in life. For ins...
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Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'goals'' or 'goal's'?
Suggestion: goals'; goal's
...res and thereupon efforts to attain the goals comes at cost. Sometimes, people devote...
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Line 4, column 579, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'served'.
Suggestion: served
...perts report that use of pesticides has serve side-affect and should not be used and ...
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Line 4, column 585, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[14]
Message: Did you mean 'side effect' (=adverse effect, unintended consequence)? Open compounds are not hyphenated.
Suggestion: side effect
...report that use of pesticides has serve side-affect and should not be used and vouched for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, furthermore, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96712328767 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47887699142 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608219178082 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1375279463 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.3125 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32187689011 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105771459348 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067405367504 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213626643099 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058906878238 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.