The earth is being filled with waste material such as plastic bags and other rubbish. Is this really happening? What are some solutions to this problem? Give reasons for this and give relevant example.
It is undoubtly the case that; in this present scenerio, our globe is full of waste material like: polythene bags which is affecting the society adversely. Through this essay, I am going to examine the possible reasons for this and suggest some preventive measures that individuals could implement to reduce this problem.
I have to say that; production of waste material in huge amount is "Burning question of the day" but, the first step is to understand why this waste is produced in massive amount? Broadly speaking, there are main three reasons for this. The first and foremost is; life-style of modern generation. It is commonly seen by us that people prefer to purchase things from the market for instance, water bottles and after utilizing them people discard them which is responsible for producing plethora of waste on Earth.
Apart from that, lack of awareness is also the main factor that causes problem of waste. Mostly individuals were not consious about the negative impacts of rubbish accumulated on the earth. It is true that; human beings are responsible for generating waste on globe as, they carry plastic bags to carry objects. As a result, polythene bags are a non-biodegradable and persist in the soil for many years that leads to decrease the fertility of soil and produce waste material.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem giving complexity to its causes. However, I believe that there is one solution to solve this problem is to make general public aware about illeffects of accumulation of rubbish on Earth and it is the duty of the government to implement the rules to save the earth by keeping 3 R in mind which means recycle, reuse and reduce because, it is famous saying that " prevention is better than cure."
To make it crown, I pen down saying that; there are variety of different factors of this problem. I personally believe that, there is no single solution to this problem. This could probably solved by making public aware about strategies to reduce the waste and it is only possible by reducing, reusing and recycling the plastic bags.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...lution to solve this problem is to make general public aware about illeffects of accumulation ...
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Line 7, column 462, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s; prevention is better than cure.' To make it crown, I pen down saying that...
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Line 9, column 191, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'solve'
Suggestion: solve
...on to this problem. This could probably solved by making public aware about strategies...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, apart from, broadly speaking, for instance, in fact, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97478991597 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66171597508 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.473958658 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.857142857 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370794607561 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125497846025 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774313652283 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20434808623 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568316684214 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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