International tourism is a good business but can lead to fights instead of understanding between tourist and locals. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Tourism has a big share in every nation's economy s it is a one-time investment and long-term gain. Tourism brings people's together as i disagree with this statement because tourism enhances the international brotherhood and leads to peaceful future.
When people visit to other countries where they get knowledge about the local and national customs and tradition and they also share their customs and practices with them. It helps in to unite the different nations by spiritually and emotionally as people share their regional thoughts with others. For example, when international tourists visit India, they become astonished by knowing the diversity of this nation and sometimes they are trying to adopt certain cultural habits. However, sometimes an excessive number of tourists may disturb the normal life of locals due to over-exploitation of natural resources. A recent example of this incident happens in Shimla where an overload of the tourists lead to the shortage of water and it causes great hemorrhage to the local life's. To avoid this type of problems, better policies should be employed by the government authorities.
International tourism provide a large share in nation's economy, it provides various jobs in tourism section. People can also begin their own small business at the tourist places. For example, certain countries such as Thailand and Bhutan are well maintained their tourist places and obtain a large amount of investment in this section.
In conclusion, international tourism should be promoted as it forces the government authorities to maintain the heritage of the nation and most importantly it strengthens the nation's economy.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
Tourism has a big share in every nations economy s it is a one-time investment a...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ain. Tourism brings peoples together as i disagree with this statement because to...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...and most importantly it strengthens the nations economy.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tly it strengthens the nations economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41153846154 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89116947735 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5174045262 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128600910699 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512237564316 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431930077907 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888298753477 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350559214307 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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