young people should choose their job freely but some people think that parents and/ or teachers should choose the job for them.
In present era, getting a good job is very difficult task, likewise choosing career in particular field. In this matter some masses said that youngster should choose their job independently, whereas opponent reckons that parents and teacher should recommend better job to them. I am going to discuss both views along my opinion in forthcoming paragraphs.
On one side, some people think that youngster should choose their job by self because they know their taste very well, means they aware about their interest and likes about particular field. For example, some like medical and others engineering field, so there is no need to force them to choose other area instead of those one. Further, they also have a right to think and understand by own about scope of area, for which they are going to applying for work.
On other side, opponent deem that teacher and students know very well about strength of their pupil and parents know about their children, so they can guide them effectively foe selection of job. Beside this, they think better regard to their capacity and knowledge of students, so definitely they make everything easy for them.
I strongly consider that grown up should be independent to choose their field for work, some they do not share their felling with their parents and teacher. Moreover, they can also work effectively in area that is choose by them with encouragement and confidence.
To conclude, young one are mature to take self decision regarding their work field, but they only support of their parents and teacher so that they cannot fell alone. The right selection is only given by their parents and near once.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: NEED_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going to apply'?
Suggestion: going to apply
...about scope of area, for which they are going to applying for work. On other side, opponent de...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...n also work effectively in area that is choose by them with encouragement and confiden...
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Line 9, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y given by their parents and near once.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, moreover, regarding, so, well, whereas, for example, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 20.9802955665 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98916967509 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37724466773 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548736462094 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4250850339 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414421699165 0.242375264174 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156220465627 0.0925447433944 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117514139908 0.071462118173 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241083834932 0.151781067708 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845725256135 0.0609392437508 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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