Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With the advent of technology, our world has been modernized; hence, many concepts have been exposed to changes. Many people assert that this trend has forced people to rely on each other. On the contrast, some others opine that the public has pivoted toward independence. This essay seeks to investigate both mentioned viewpoint, followed by my own perception.
On the one hand, the former group state a plethora of indisputable points to justify their perspective. First and foremost, they say people are able to inculcate themselves on their own. To elaborate, the development of internet and educational websites has rendered the conventional edification completely obsolete; therefore, their dependence on teachers is less significant than before. Moreover, modern services such as email eliminate people reliance on postal service and many employees from sorters to postmen because the process is now automated. Last but not least, psychological dependency has decreased among people. To illustrate, these days, due to the mundane mechanical life, people have the tendency to distance themselves from loved ones and have a less emotional attachment to family and loved ones.
On the other hand, there are manifold reasons that the latter group enlist to demonstrate their view. Firstly, the social media and modern inventions such as mobile phones push people to be in touch more often. People have the ability to talk to each other and be informed about others from longer distances. Therefore, because of the availability of these, people tend to be more socially dependent on each other than before. Furthermore, these developments force the masses to depend on the specialty of others. For instance, people need mechanics to repair their cars or engineers to repair their computer.
To recapitulate, on the basis of the aforementioned irrefutable arguments from both sides, I believe while we are more independent in some aspects such as online teaching and communication services, we more depend on professionals who are specialized in modern fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, as for, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43167701863 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94193810389 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605590062112 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3942995922 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.882352941 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351382050592 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989449161235 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750297133875 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200862232319 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06100206756 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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