Some people believe that Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree?
There is currently a contentious argument over whether youths who make heavy offence should be penalized in the same methods as adults. I totally disagree with this opinion because children often do not understand all results of their actions and youngsters behaviors can be easier and faster corrected by minor punishment than grow-ups.
The main reason why I support this statement is young people most of the time are hooked by emotions and do not analyze all negative aspects. For example, many youngsters who made serios crimes just follow adults or make decision based on unreal stories.
Another reason why I believe children should not be punished as adults is because youngsters behaviors are very flexible and can be corrected without strong penalties. This is because they do not have a solid society vision and their brains are still under development process.
In conclusion, I completely disagree that children who engage in serious illegal acts should be punished as grown-ups. This is because young people are influenced then older generation; moreover, youngsters behaviors can be gently adjusted with appropriate treatment. Given this situation, it seems that people should be more accurate with a young generation and use other methods of penalizing.
- Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- The use of mobile phone is as anti-social as smoking. Since smoking is banned in certain places, using mobile phone should be banned as well. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 78
- The use of mobile phone is as anti-social as smoking. Since smoking is banned in certain places, using mobile phone should be banned as well. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people believe that Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree? 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on and use other methods of penalizing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, still, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35820895522 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70294437042 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7639965814 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306302867645 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12146079369 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527467682229 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174874133966 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576438667498 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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