More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country.Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the outweigh?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays,pupils want to get sophisticated knowledge about the every aspect of their study when they study tertiary level education so to fulfill their all aspirations,they are marching towards abroad and at that place,they are continuing their study.In fact,this trend is escalating day-to-day and it has umpteen merits and demerits so in the subsequent paragraphs,I will discuss valid causes and examples to support my answer.
Considering the pros.,when it comes to studying abroad,it is universally true that one can enhance his knowledge at a new place under a different environment and also learn some techniques to cop up with different problems which he will face at that place,as a consequence,it will be so helpful for him to make him well qualified and organized.To cite an example,at present,a plethora of learners are earning their bread and butter along their university study in abroad and such students are going to get success in their near future.In addition,overseas study is more helpful to make a pupil practically strong and on the behalf of this kind of study,a learner can invent anything according to his desire.Moreover,the most plausible reason for this development is that one can learn more languages and he can share his ideas with native speakers of that nation,as a result,he can pursue his career in any companies and factories as a worker.For example,innumerable learners make bilingual with the help of overseas study.
Considering the cons.,it is an expensive way of learning so everyone cannot afford foreign study and sometimes,a pupil has to face some financial problems at Abroad and because of that,he have to indulge into bad activities that's why it is not a good development.For instance, currently,umpteen Indian learners are studying at Canada and due to some money related problems,many of them are earning their fees in illegal way.
In the compendium,after analysing the above stated information,it is lucid that advantages of this ideology overweigh its disadvantages so it is a good way to get education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34153846154 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3894008128 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590769230769 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 81.0 20.2975951904 399% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 312.654261925 49.4020404114 633% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 434.0 106.682146367 407% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 81.25 20.7667163134 391% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.75 7.06120827912 393% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172100217398 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868404443189 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539370499838 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868404443189 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539370499838 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.3 13.0946893788 338% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -19.2 50.2224549098 -38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.1 11.3001002004 319% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.88 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.56 8.58950901804 146% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.4 10.1190380762 340% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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