You wish to enroll in a course at an Australian college. You have already written a letter to the college asking for information but have received no reply.
Write a letter to the college. In your letter
Express your concern because the course will start in less than two months.
Find out if you can still enroll
Ask for further information about the course, including the cost.
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to get the information about the collage's CAD courses. I understand that the course commences in less than two months. I had written to you for three weeks ago but I have not received any response from your side yet. I presume that you did not receive my letter.
Would you please let me know if it is too late for me too enroll in the course? Please advise me if there is any place available. I strongly feel that my enrollment is still possible.
I would like to know more about the course before I take decision on that. I realize that I do not have enough time. It would be appreciate if you would send your reply by express email with all the sufficient information about the courses. Would you please inform me about the cost of the course and whether the certificate you offer be a sufficient qualification for me to apply to one of the CAD collages in your city.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Your faithfully.
XYZ
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- You have a problem with a neighbour.Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letterDescribe the problemSay how long it has been a problemExplain what action you would like the neighbour to take 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...urse commences in less than two months. I had written to you for three weeks ago ...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ceived any response from your side yet. I presume that you did not receive my let...
^
Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to enroll'?
Suggestion: to enroll
...se let me know if it is too late for me too enroll in the course? Please advise me if ther...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l that my enrollment is still possible. I would like to know more about the cour...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... course before I take decision on that. I realize that I do not have enough time....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43956043956 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46822580624 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582417582418 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2723670756 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3333333333 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287771789282 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989972566123 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617293467493 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158445281882 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852294540799 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.