The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are living
Write a letter to the editor of the local newspaper:
- Where did you hear this news and your opinion?
- The reason why you protest it
- Make suggestions for what people can or should do to stop the development
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your address or the address of the newspaper.
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to your newspaper to protest flat development proposal by the local council on the park opposite to my residence.
To begin with, all the residents of this society area against this construction due to the several reason. Firstly, this is only the one park in the whole society and children used it as a playground and play several games here like cricket, hockey and football. Secondly, adults come here for jogging and exercising, which is pivotal for their health. Moreover, old age people like to come here to meet with their friend and feel relax. They like to spend quality time with their friends while enjoying the beauty of nature. It provides fresh air and reduces pollution in our community.
Therefore, we all have decided to protest this development by picketing on the main road on coming Monday. So, I want to you to convey this information through your newspaper to all the residents, in order to get the maximum support.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon.
Your sincererly,
Kirti
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to your newspap...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...ea against this construction due to the several reason. Firstly, this is only the one park in ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, in order to get the maximum support. I look forward to hearing from you as so...
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Line 11, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you as soon. Your sincererly, Kirti
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91111111111 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54754784057 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6595011701 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3636363636 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1948990183 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669407821584 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721620159507 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14469551814 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768094896851 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.