You want to apply for the following job.write a letter to Mr Moore describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job. Waiter /waitress required for evening job. Some experience would be necessary.
Respected Mr Moore, I read about the vacancy of waitress in your restaurant in today's newspaper .I had been looking for one such job since last two weeks. Actually I am a student and keenly require this job to put up with my study expenses. I had already been working at Pizza Hut as a waitress for about 6 months but then I had to leave the work due to my semester exams. I could not join back as the vacancy was already filled by some needy. This experience of mine would be of great help for this particular job. I am perfect at taking orders ,dealing with the customers and handling all the services given by a waitress . I have even done a diploma in hotel management which has always been of great help to me. I think I would be a suitable choice for this job as I can do full justice with this profession due to my past working experience and knowledge. I am sending this letter for your kind consideration and hope full cooperation from your side .It would be a great favour to me . Sincerely yours
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- You want to apply for the following job.write a letter to Mr Moore describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job. Waiter /waitress required for evening job. Some experience would be necessary. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Respected Mr Moore, I read about the vacancy of waitress in...
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... I read about the vacancy of waitress in your restaurant in todays newspaper ....
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... in your restaurant in todays newspaper .I had been looking for one such job sinc...
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...in your restaurant in todays newspaper .I had been looking for one such job since...
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...s job to put up with my study expenses. I had already been working at Pizza Hut ...
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...cular job. I am perfect at taking orders ,dealing with the customers and handling ...
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...ing all the services given by a waitress . I have even done a diploma in hotel man...
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...ch has always been of great help to me. I think I would be a suitable choice for...
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... I think I would be a suitable choice for ...
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... past working experience and knowledge. I am sending this letter for your kind co...
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...and hope full cooperation from your side .It would be a great favour to me . ...
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...d hope full cooperation from your side .It would be a great favour to me . ...
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...r side .It would be a great favour to me . ...
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...ide .It would be a great favour to me . Sincerely yours
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... Sincerely yours
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, look, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26178010471 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47564311384 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612565445026 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.1190191089 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307917562939 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11484792153 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950269678882 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307917562939 0.12726935374 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.