Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means while others believe that these games are contributing to children's development.
In this technology laden world modern gizmos have become part and parcel of life. Children are no longer exclusions in this field. Unlike earlier kids, they have shifted their play areas from outdoors to their specific rooms. But the question stands as to whether these modern computer games are really beneficial for them?; or is it just mere wastage of time? My essay shall delve into both the possibilities through examples and shape up my opinion by the end. 2. On one side of the coin are the parents which strongly oppose the use of video games by their children. They strengthen their viewpoint by claiming that playing such games greatly effects their physical health especially eyesight.Doctors all over the world confirm the increase in the eyesight problems at childhood stage due to continuous sitting before the screens. Distraction from studies and other co-curricular activities are also supportive arguments for this line of thought. 3. But there is an another side, masses do believe in the positive effects of these on- screen games. Children learn the hand- eye coordination by playing such games . Researchers have proven that brain development exercises include such type of games which are recommended even for the adults. Young minds are like clay which can be moulded in any direction. Once they start multitasking with the help of these activities, it will have a long lasting impression on their minds. They will learn to organize the things according to their priorities. 4. No single conclusion can be made on weighing both the sides . But everything has its own limits and so is the case here . Proper distribution of time for all the physical, mental and study related activities for children can really help in their all round development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05479452055 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68895834546 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650684931507 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9636543404 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8235294118 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23529411765 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214899896231 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623189717061 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660452085937 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214899896231 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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