U stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend:
Describe the file
Ask him to return it to you by post
Ask him about the approximate cost of sending the documents.
Dear Roy,
The last time we met was when I came to Australia to attend a business seminar and I stayed at your home. It just so happened that I forgot a very important file containing all my documents in your cupboard. I kept it there with my clothes but in hurry to catch the flight I forgot to pack it.
The file contains my newly updated resume
DMC from my school and college
Provisional certificate
Certificate in sport activities
Certificates of co curricular activities held at hostels and science exhibition
Certificate of participation in workshop.
It will be very helpful if you can send me that file by speed post. You understand how important that is. Please tell me the approximate cost of sending that file. I will reimburse that amount into your account.
Yours faithfully
John Cena.
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- U stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend:Describe the fileAsk him to return it to you by postAsk him about the approximat 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Roy, The last time we met was when I came to ...
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Line 6, column 13, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: certificate
...from my school and college Provisional certificate Certificate in sport activities Certificates of co...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urse that amount into your account. Yours faithfully ...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours faithfully John Cena.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 139.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92086330935 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85129978433 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697841726619 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3771879796 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.29896907216 233% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244136100811 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982641813504 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563107219315 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664917990901 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813564852763 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.