Nowadays people throw away old things and adapt new things do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantages
In the tech savvy generation, as more and more advancements are brought to captivate people, who then, abandon the older ones, and replace them with new ones. So this topic assert that is throwaway society is fruitful for economy or not? the following essay will take a look at both sides of argument before shaping up my opinion at end.
to embark with, outlawing the negatives of throwaway society is, deletering the natural environment. As for innovation of new gadgets, machinery is required in large number. As a consequence, to meet the demands of equipment has taken the pollution levels higher, and wasting non renewable sources such as gas and so on. likewise the throwaway community, has brought clashes and distances in friendship. it then showed three outcomes; bulling, isolation due to presence of innovated material in some forces them to corner those who lack such things, and classicism. as a quintessence, a recent study showed that in spite of Asian communities, America and canada are contributing to world population by 5.2% and are accountable fot 5.2% of consumption whereas Asian countries has 22.4% of populace and consumption is only 2%.
Apart from that, emphasising on positives in aspect of economy, that by discarding the old products society is stepping forward. similarly, a survey conducted by WHO stated that average ninumber of burglary and death cases are abated. because security has increased due to invention of close circuit telectelevisions and safety alarms. however, in medical field new cures and tools help a patient to live longer.considering the personal development, individual has become more adroit by using smart things which made them more creative and skillful. which in turn is boosting the country economy as people buy more and more updated products.
Taking everything into consideration, i believe that there is only one solution for this, is enforcement of laws by legislation , and by rank and file to use the RRR rules of; reduce, reuse, and recycle the products to reduce the harms and also for more progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, likewise, look, similarly, so, then, whereas, apart from, as for, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15430267062 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94627767726 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640949554896 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9797780689 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0910040776263 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293010206779 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311951212674 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457932834643 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297907846255 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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