You recently had your computer fixed at a local computer store. However, you are not pleased with the service you received.
Wrote a letter to store manager. In the letter:
-describe the situation.
- explain why you are dissatisfied.
- say what you want manager to do.
Respected sir, I had my personal computer fixed from your store because this is the best, or so I have heard. I wanted to bring this to your notice that I am not satisfied with the services that I got.
First of all, I wanted my computer to be upgraded in terms of RAM and graphic card. Secondly, I wanted "Windows 8.1" which is a professional version of Windows 8. I also added that I wanted internal cleaning of CPU and to be careful with that, because, obviously electronic circuits are delicate.
My prime concern was with respect to RAM and the graphic card which was still the same as before. RAM, however, was changed according to my demand. The operating system I got was windows 8 - home basic, which is of no use to me at all.
I request the store manager to look into my situation and make some ammendments because the basic necessity was to upgrade my system for more computational power but what I got was, still an obsolete system.
Yours faithful
Johnson.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill an obsolete system. Yours faithful Johnson.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, look, second, secondly, so, still, as to, first of all, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59322033898 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63562193169 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64406779661 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3043194529 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 4.34317383033 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123778960969 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520622755542 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363999552844 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799436130754 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467749186298 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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