Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
From the beginning of the creation of nations, every group has been having a leader mostly chosen by people and there has been different leaders all around the world, some highly dogmatic and dictator and some naïve and yielding. In my opinion, neither a dogmatic leader nor a yielding leader is suitable for an instructive leadership. A true effective leader needs to be sometimes dictator and sometimes flexible.
Let's consider a leader who always yields to public's opinion. The former ruler of Iran, Mohammadreza Shah was the same type. As a result of his flexibility, he lost the power and surrendered the country to Khomeini who later became the Iranian leader based on the polls. A transition of power which made Iran one of the worst countries in the world because the new ruler was so highly opinionated that couldn't stand other political parties and order the execution of all parties that were not in accordance with his political views. By mentioning Khomeini, I was trying to show how a ruler who always stays committed to limited principals can lead to a disaster.
Although each country has its own rules and laws and sticking to those laws is a way to keep the country and nation organized, however these laws have to be passed based on the public's best interest and should be passed by chosen representatives of different public groups. The fact is that this is the only way for a country and nation to thrive, by having a representative of different classes in a society who can question the laws and even the leader.
In addition, it is true that democracy is the only solution to a highly effective and successful nation. It is evident that power leads to corruption in most of the cases and as we have always noticed so many leaders have a tendency to become a dictator. Only dictatorial leaders don't listen to their people and don't let their people have the right to talk and express their concerns. As an example we can mention Iran, with the most dictatorial government in the world. The ultimate decision in every single issue has to be in compliance with Mr. Khamenei, Iranian leader. Although he always follows particular principals and objectives, however those principals are all in favor of his opinion and they are all made by him.
In conclusion, for having the most triumphal nation, a country needs leaders who are committed to consider the best for their nation and follow a set of principles and laws passed by people's representatives and they have always follow the nation's best interest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82068965517 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69191966762 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468965517241 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6329689658 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.352941176 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5882352941 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234069349386 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811693136601 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611253144526 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135832899925 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641403880282 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.