You have moved to different house, Write a letter to your friend

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You have moved to different house, Write a letter to your friend

Dear Jack,
I hope this letter find you and your family well. I am writing to let you know that we have shifted to a new house located near to the city center.

Actually, my previous house was quite far from my office location and; as you know that I don't have a conveyance, so daily morning I had to walk 01 hour to reach at my office and it took almost same time to home in evening. Sometimes, I had to stay late in office and by the time I reach home my family would already asleep.

In addition, the house was quite old so I had to spend much amount of money for its repair that becomes unnecessary pain on my pocket. Due to these reasons, I decided to look for another house and luckily I found one located a few steps away from my office.

Let me tell you more about my new house, first of all, it is a newly built house and fully furnished so no maintenance pain, it has got a new swimming pool, beautiful garden and a gym for exercise. Second of all, it is located a few steps away from my office which is such a relief for me.

It has been a while we haven't seen each other and my family is also anxious to meet yours. So, I would like to invite you over the weekend to have dinner with us, where I can show you my new house.

We look forward to see you this weekend. Don't forget to bring your dog, my child loves it.

Best wishes,
Naveed

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...office location and; as you know that I dont have a conveyance, so daily morning I h...
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Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...ance, so daily morning I had to walk 01 hour to reach at my office and it took almos...
^^^^
Line 10, column 24, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...elief for me. It has been a while we havent seen each other and my family is also a...
^^^^^^
Line 12, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...ow you my new house. We look forward to see you this weekend. Dont forget to bring ...
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Line 12, column 42, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...e look forward to see you this weekend. Dont forget to bring your dog, my child love...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, look, second, so, well, while, in addition, you know, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 270.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.07037037037 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06083406344 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.7858330725 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5384615385 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151826108049 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595331770897 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690639375075 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966617528974 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858063341359 0.0580467560999 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.33 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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