The world would be a poorer place without colors.
Color has played an indispensable role in every aspect of our lives. Being able to identify colors is one of the most vital features that distinguish human beings from most of other species. In my opinion, it is undeniable that a world without colors would be a place full of boredom and depression.
First and foremost, obviously, there is a strong connection between colors and our emotions. They do not only directly affect your mood but also have the ability of changing your feelings. Apparently, the colors you choose to wear reflect your current state of mood or the emotions you want to achieve. For example, warm colors often evoke feelings of happiness, optimism and energy, whereas cold ones represent calmness, tranquility, and sometimes sadness. Additionally, colors also have the power of healing. Gazing out the window at a patch of green on a tree leaf can calm you down and boost your energy. Understandably, in the field of medicine, colors have also been used for ages as a healing therapy to speed up the recovering process of patients.
Interestingly, colors also reflect our personal traits. For example, people who are keen on black are often artistic and sensitive, meanwhile those loving red are often tenacious and determined.
Lastly, a colorless world would be a harder and dangerous place to live. For instance, the roads would be full of chaos and traffic congestions as all traffic lights and signals would become useless without the colors red and green. Similarly, advertising would be much more difficult and less effective since there were no colors to catch the attention of customers.
Briefly, color is one of the most exciting and precious experiences in life. Without colors, the world would become a dark and lifeless planet. Hence, living in a colorful world is a blessing to humans that we have to treasure and take great advantages of it.
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- Some people believe that it is good to share as much as information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too invaluable to be shared freely.Discuss both views and give yo 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, briefly, but, first, hence, if, lastly, similarly, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02222222222 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70602846864 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1430215361 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8888888889 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245285644321 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856022360187 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134811859677 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15721112226 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133819347638 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.