In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able do not require security from a man can bring. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
"Love is moral even without legal marriage, but marriage is immoral without love". In the current time of technological advancement, the most pressing concern is regarding the given topic asserts that" Is it necessary for women to get married; they are able to earn their own money. I completely agree with the statement and shall explore the same from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, this statement the one of the main reason is Education. In the past, the education facilities were poor. Moreover, girls were not allowed to study by their parents because of the domestic violence. But, nowadays girls are smart and intelligent due to this reason they do not want to do marriage. In addition, boys were given more opportunities in the past but now the girls are complete with the boys. A survey is conducted by the Hindustan Times where 8 out of 10 girls are the topper in the board examination of different states.
Moving further, the women are thinking that there is no freedom after marriage; they do not fulfil their wishes. Apart from all this, there will be a lot of responsibilities on the girls for household chores due to this reason they want to spend their life herself. Moreover, the women used to did work under their husband family. A survey is conducted at the University of Chandigarh by the government where 450 out of 500 women prefer to survive their life without marriage.
I pen down to saying that there are a number of answers to this question. However, I tend to believe that in many nations female no longer sense the urge to tie or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...do not want to do marriage. In addition, boys were given more opportunities in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, apart from, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79928315412 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66896844429 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.296852206 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17819051359 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534403838364 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463899646299 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101458521464 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226626216773 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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