The foLtowing diagram shows nitrogen sourcds and
concentration tevels in the groundwater of a coastaI city.
Summarise the information by setecting and reporting the
main features.
You should write at Least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates different sources and concentration levels of nitrogen in ground water of coastal city.
Overall,waste disposal and industries releases maximum Nitrogen in ground water;when compared with other sources.
In natural condition,lightning oxidizes Nitrogen whereas vegetation fixes it. Domestic and market waste add Nitrogen in water table through fertilizer and household wastes.Industries contribute in Nitrogen addition through leakage from storage tank and wastewater ponds.lastly,disposal of waste in landfills may lead to more Nitrogen in water table.
The groundwater flows,passing near to salt water interface,towards it's destination ocean and gets discharged into it;from groundwater discharge zone.some Nitrogen is taken up by soil particles,while other degassed.The higher concentration of Nitrogen is indicated by darker section on the illustration and this shows that heaviest concentration of Nitrogen comes from industry,household liquid waste and landfill.The concentration tend to decrease near salt water interface and between area of high concentration of Nitrogen which descend from industry and waste disposal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ground water of coastal city. Overall,waste disposal and industries releases maximu...
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...h other sources. In natural condition,lightning oxidizes Nitrogen whereas vegetation fi...
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.... Domestic and market waste add Nitrogen in water table through fertilizer and ho...
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Suggestion: Industries
...through fertilizer and household wastes.Industries contribute in Nitrogen addition through...
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Suggestion: , disposal
...storage tank and wastewater ponds.lastly,disposal of waste in landfills may lead to more ...
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Suggestion: , passing
...in water table. The groundwater flows,passing near to salt water interface,towards it...
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...try,household liquid waste and landfill.The concentration tend to decrease near sal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, may, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.49032258065 4.92477711251 132% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.8349615749 2.65546596893 144% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.45097560976 138% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 184.381127017 43.030603864 428% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.2 112.824112599 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0990679398914 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596096355119 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281176608285 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675677805827 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278112170713 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 13.2329268293 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 6.17 61.2550243902 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.3012195122 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.95 11.4140731707 184% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.39 8.06136585366 141% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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