You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
. thank your friend for the holiday.
. explain that you left your wallet in their house.
. give them instructions of how to send it back to you.
Dear Jason,
I hope you enjoyed as much i on our holiday trip and it was wonderful experience for me. We revived our nostalgic memories of our college days. I could not thank you for joining me and making it memorable and delightful experience for me.
But unfortunately i forgot my wallet at your place. Although i double checked my luggage and quite sure i was not forgetting anything. I had not realized until i reached my home and was about to place order on shopping site through my credit card. At once i was cringed that i lost my wallet and valuable items. Then i think about it deeply then i got to know that i forgot to collect wallet in drawer in your house. It is a black color wallet contains my Pan card, driving license, adhaar card, credit card and some amount of cash. you can understand how much these items are important for any individual. I am pretty sure that you will find it in top most right hand drawer in you guest room.
I would be very thankful to you if you could send me at my address as soon as possible. Please send me through express service of ecom delivery partner as they are quite responsible and have branch in hometown. Thanks in advance and sorry for inconvenience caused to you by this.
I am looking forward to see you soon
Yours,
Anonymous
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...xperience for me. But unfortunately i forgot my wallet at your place. Althoug...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...orgot my wallet at your place. Although i double checked my luggage and quite sur...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ouble checked my luggage and quite sure i was not forgetting anything. I had not ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ting anything. I had not realized until i reached my home and was about to place ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ng site through my credit card. At once i was cringed that i lost my wallet and v...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...credit card. At once i was cringed that i lost my wallet and valuable items. Then...
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Suggestion: I
...lost my wallet and valuable items. Then i think about it deeply then i got to kno...
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...tems. Then i think about it deeply then i got to know that i forgot to collect wa...
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...about it deeply then i got to know that i forgot to collect wallet in drawer in y...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...d, credit card and some amount of cash. you can understand how much these items are...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...to you by this. I am looking forward to see you soon Yours, Anonymous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44769874477 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45696846448 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602510460251 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.4257788171 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.8666666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307645811618 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101446609563 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702136816089 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178886794942 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032302363141 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.