Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?
In contemporary epoch,everybody is in the mad race of money because it is the prime need of time so adolescents are marching towards cities to pursue their study or job and this trend is burgeoning all around the globe.In fact,it is owing to immense causes so in the following paragraphs,I will cast light on merits and demerits of this ideology.
On the one hand,at present,teens want to get Cosmopolitan cognition about the every aspect of the globe and they have less number of opportunities in countryside area so they have to shift in metropolitan as well as small cities according to their aspirations.For instance,innumerable pupils from other parts of India are studying in New Delhi and most of them belong to village.In addition,in cities, juveniles can earn bread and butter along their study and in spite of it,they can enjoy a plethora of facilities which are available at these places.Moreover,they can clinch their goals more easily and swiftly with the help of sophisticated education and work opportunities.
On the flip side,nowadays,in new cities,many teenagers are living their life under stress because they are missing their hometown and because of this,some of them are becoming drug addicted so in this way,it is a negative approach.To exemplify,in India, umpteen teens are in the habit of consuming alcohol, smoking cigarettes and taking pills etcetera who are living in cities apart from their parents.Last but not least,because of hectic schedule,they do not have enough time to cook from on their own so they have to eat from outside bistros and restaurants which have non hygienic food,as a result,they are loosing their body stamina and strength.
In crux,after pondering over the above mentioned points it is quite evident that the benefits of this trend are overweighing its disadvantages, therefore ,it is a positive approach which will definitely escalate constantly in near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, in fact, as a result, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27361563518 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28807637918 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615635179153 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.2975951904 374% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 189.612104044 49.4020404114 384% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 404.75 106.682146367 379% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.75 20.7667163134 370% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.0 7.06120827912 439% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186022670927 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106114787146 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280045162415 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106114787146 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280045162415 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.8 13.0946893788 319% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -14.12 50.2224549098 -28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 11.3001002004 302% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.47 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.83 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.1190380762 320% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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