the table below gives information about favourite pastimes in different cout tries in percentage
TThe provided tabular representation demonstrates the eight nations by their favourite pastime activities from people of age 30-50 years. the data is calibrated in percentum which is clearly and coherently represented.
overall, it is crystal clear that among all countries reading had been performed by large interest of natives whereas, Japanese showed no interest in any of activities except reading.
As it can be observed that 60% of Canadian student watched tv, and less than a fifth of people did reading while one fourth were employed in other hobbies. however, the proportion of people in music , and sleep was 3 and 2 respectively with no people liked to sleep. Likewise, France residents reading, hobbies, and music percentum was 30, 20 , and 4. similar trend had seen in England where 20% of people slept. moreover, Australian participated in all activities by majority in television and hobbies.
moving further, Koreans did reading by 60%, and similar people were watching TV and playing sports. Least participated in music, beach, and sleep.Chinese liked reading, hobbies. furthermore , americans majority did reading whereas, showed less interest in sleeping. In Japan, residents liked reading by 62 % instead of other activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45595854922 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93973936968 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647668393782 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.651866088 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0188217738836 0.215688989381 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00666358899241 0.103423049105 6% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022100624445 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0166754313846 0.15604864568 11% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288826943962 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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